'Illegal Deforestation..'

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"It's been ages..

Since i poured my heart out..

You seem so far..

Circumstances have changed..

Negativity is thriving..

Illusion captivating thought-process..

Alas! you could feel my emotions..

And dump the rampant illegal deforestation..

Promises often turn upside down..

Leaving no room for restoration..!!"

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Reviews

[Michael X]

so true and vivid in the messege, deforestation ruining the lands.
This poem sees it first hand. Great job!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Thought provoking piece, that has deep meaning!

[KAREN]

Very deep write, but solid and powerful too!

[Arielle Ann]

Negativity is thriving..
Illusion captivating thought-process..
Alas! you could feel my emotions..
And dump the rampant illegal deforestation..
...lines to be pondered over...I thought deforestation was used as a metaphor here...and yet it also seems as an appeal from our forests! maybe you tried to weave two in one....anyways I liked the flow and structure here...nice write!

[Dayran]

A soft will that refers to the experience of deforestation gently as all that is needed to convince anyone that we have all lost our common sense completely. Subtle!

[Thea]

Aw...A very powerful piece...I love the ending...Great work, Priyankaabhilaashi!
:)))

[stars are far]

good piece :D

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Beautiful...good job!

[Coyote Poetry]

Here in the USA. Our great president gave the USA government the right to take any land with the owner permission. No land is safe in the USA. Teddy Roosevelt must be rolling in his grave. He protected the lady over 100 year ago. Now can be destroyed and deforestation. Thank you for the outstanding poem. This is a world wide problem.

Coyote

[joshua deathdealer]

I like your structure and set up here. Nice work.