'Deepest grain..'

For someone who was my soul for ages! As the world has changed..i have decided to move ahead towards my Dream..!!Thanks a zillion tons for making me what i am today..!!!Thank you for pushing me away!

...

"You walked past my heart..

Ripping my soul apart..

Placed you at the highest cadre..

You crushed emotional ladder..

What did you gain through this..

The silliest of me will surely miss..

Deepest grain of the core..

Will shed the memories more..

I am happy you left..

No one will dare theft..

Thank you, for you made me strong..

Will mold, so nothing seems wrong..!!!!"

...

20th July, 2011

Author's Note

Pure raw words..!!!

Reviews

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you ‼Z£î&..!!!!!!!!

[Thea]

Well written...Keep writing.. :)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This poem was very gutsy. I was drawn to the emotional ladder.
Left with no way to rise again. You did a lot with candid speech.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Mr. Sakib..!!!

[Sakib]

Nicely written. I like it