'Deepest grain..'

For someone who was my soul for ages! As the world has changed..i have decided to move ahead towards my Dream..!!Thanks a zillion tons for making me what i am today..!!!Thank you for pushing me away!

...

"You walked past my heart..

Ripping my soul apart..

Placed you at the highest cadre..

You crushed emotional ladder..

What did you gain through this..

The silliest of me will surely miss..

Deepest grain of the core..

Will shed the memories more..

I am happy you left..

No one will dare theft..

Thank you, for you made me strong..

Will mold, so nothing seems wrong..!!!!"

...

20th July, 2011

Author's Note

Pure raw words..!!!

Reviews

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Ms. Starrleena Magyck..!!

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Such emotion...good job!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Ms. Sweets..!!!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Tate Morgan Sir..!!!

[Sweets]

This is sad =/
but I'm glad you thought of the good things you got (:
Great work!
I enjoyed this a lot :)

[Tate Morgan]

In the united states it is the men who crush the souls of women But in india the class system has this just the opposite The women crush the men

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Tandi..!!!

[Tai Ryens]

Nicely written with lots of emotion. Strong words to bring it together.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Ms. Marie Harrison..!!!

[Marie Harrison]

Stream of powerful emotions!
I love the strength of your words