'Tightly..'

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"Whenever i think of giving up..

 Your warmth holds me tightly..

 Whenever i walk alone..

Your grip cuddles me tightly..

 Whenever my heart bleeds..

 Your compassion soothes me tightly..

Whenever i shed tear..

Your shoulder comforts me tightly..

Is this mere illusion..

Or..Do you really exist..??"

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Reviews

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Ms. CyndiR..!!!

[CyndiR]

Such beautiful write! I love how you use 'tightly' in the end of every last stanza, the feeling inside is such real. This poem gives me a very warm feeling. A very nice poem, there is a scent of sweetness inside!
Wonderful Job!
~CyndiR

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Ms. Priyanka Natesh..!!

[Priyanka Natesh]

Oh! This one is so meaningful! and so beautiful!! I loved this so much Priyanka! Thank you :)

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Ms. storiestotell..!!!

[KAREN]

Beautiful and heartfelt!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Ms. sarah..!!!

[sarah]

I have felt this feeling before wondering if it's real, i'm kinda in that position right now great great write! So full of emotion and love.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you stars are far..!!!!

[stars are far]

wow
that is so nice and romantic, i loved this ..
great work :)