'Can you forgive..'
A Poem by Priyankaabhilaashi
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"Whenever
i sail on my shallowest rift..your soul binds me with the thread of
every saline drop..!! I badly need you, today..and you are not here..!!!
My words have ruffled the blend..!!!
Can you forgive..???"
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© 2011 Priyankaabhilaashi
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Thank you Cherrie Palmer Madam..!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
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my words have ruffled the blend..great line that adds to the image of a small rift the whole image is made complete with the last transition
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Thank you Lutz Sir..!!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
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Thank you Ms. Stefanie..!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
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This is so good, I am saving it to use myself when I totally screw up sometime. You are so very talented. Thank you for sharing your words with us!
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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some can easily forgive but others can't. This is good....
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Thank you Ms. imagination101..!!!
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Thank you Ms. storiestotell..!!
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Thank you Ms. Angelina Paige..!!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
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A question we all have to ask others and even ourself
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on March 9, 2011
Last Updated on March 9, 2011
Author
PriyankaabhilaashiJaipur, India
About
A traveller by choice..A writer by soul..!!!!
A freelance writer..A Doctorate..A Management Graduate..!!!!! Born and brought up in Jaipur, The Pink City.
You may read me here also:
http://enri.. more..
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