'Keep Moving..'

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"Let the hope die..

Let the fragrance fade..

Let the people disperse..

I will KEEP MOVING..!!!!"

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Reviews

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Strong worded poem!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the directness of the poem. Your words told a sad story of separation and moving on. A outstanding poem. A complete poem with a strong story in 16 words.
Coyote

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Stefanie..!!

[Stef Outsiders]

aww sweet simply but soo full of meaning... i love it!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Sweets..!!!!

[Sweets]

I'm glad that you'll keep moving!
This poem shows your desire to move on
Great work!