'Mom..'

...

"Missed the lovely pat..

     ..the warm touch..

      ..the sweet smile..

       ..the innocent sparkle..

        ..the cosy cuddling..

         ..the colorful story..

          ..the World's purest kiss on forehead..

 Missed..

     ..sleeping on your lap..

            Missed you..

                    ..Mom..!!!"

...

Reviews

[Arsenic Nemesis]

We all love our mammys, I know I love mine. There is no one better than the woman who comes in at 3 in the morning, whilst you and your mate are still a bit dunk, and cooking you some chicken; she is a God! XD This was wonderful work, both sweet and strong; great job!~

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Stacy Perry..!!!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you imagination101..!!!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This was so wonderfully beautiful! Hip-Hip- Hooray for MOMMIES!

[StacyPerry]

This hit in a special place as a friend of mine just lost his mom and I am actually going to the funeral on Friday.

Be well and hold to what keeps you well my dear.

[Cynthia]

I agree, we all love our mom! They are the one who have look after us in our life! its a strong and powerful poem which have told out the love we give to mom and how they love us, great job!

[Charles]

Send it off to Mom before mother's day - she'll enjoy it as I did. I like the creative shape of this poem and the short 'verbless' lines. Good work.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

simply lovely.... i miss my mom too

[KAREN]

Beautiful write and heart felt! Mother's are our best friend, my is!!!

[roarke]

just keep all those thoughts, that's what memories are made of.

[Stef Outsiders]

aw this is pretty poem! Mum is the word!!