'Mom..'

'Mom..'

A Poem by Priyankaabhilaashi

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"Missed the lovely pat..
     ..the warm touch..
      ..the sweet smile..
       ..the innocent sparkle..
        ..the cosy cuddling..
         ..the colorful story..
          ..the World's purest kiss on forehead..
 Missed..
     ..sleeping on your lap..
            Missed you..
                    ..Mom..!!!"

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© 2011 Priyankaabhilaashi


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We all love our mammys, I know I love mine. There is no one better than the woman who comes in at 3 in the morning, whilst you and your mate are still a bit dunk, and cooking you some chicken; she is a God! XD This was wonderful work, both sweet and strong; great job!~

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Thank you Ms. sarah..!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is sad I love my mom this is very touching!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thank you stars are far..!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


WOW
This is a nice thing it is inscribed in my heart but now i found it
in front of my eyes really nice ...
since we are now teens we think that this is not important but inside we do miss that :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thank you Ms. Starrleena Magyck..!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


What a beautiful tribute to your mother.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thank you Ms. Sweets..!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is so beautiful and pure!
Great work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thank you Nayan..!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aha! So beautiful! An innocent realization of the warmth that the word "Mom" brings to our minds... Yes, there can be no more better definition of "Maa"

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 1, 2011
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Priyankaabhilaashi
Priyankaabhilaashi

Jaipur, India



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A traveller by choice..A writer by soul..!!!! A freelance writer..A Doctorate..A Management Graduate..!!!!! Born and brought up in Jaipur, The Pink City. You may read me here also: http://enri.. more..

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