'My Magical Obsessive Toy..'

Some magic happen like that..!!

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"Deep down the Memory Lane..

Walking on Aisle on a Rainy Day..

Found a Lovely Cute Flower..

Wrapped in a Bright Sunny Ray..

'Are angels a mystery?'..

Questioned a student of history..

Sprinkling droplets of joy..

My Magical Obsessive Toy..

Speechless persistence fall silently..

Soft words stretches the eternity..

Warm me, O My Dark Chocolate..

You are born to hold me, till late..!!"

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Reviews

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you stars are far..!!

[stars are far]

wow
it is really so nice
i love that :)

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Mr. Greg Skura..!!!

[Greg Skura]

Wow! This piece is so eloquently and beautifully expressed it is as surreal as the act in the moment itself.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Mr. Roarke..!!!

[roarke]

very mystical. angels and flowers, strong archetypes. I see a duality to the poem itself, not just the couplets... reading only the first lines, then reading only the second lines... this creates part of the mystical aspect of this piece. Lost in the wonders of nature, lost in the wonders of eternity. Nice piece.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Undying Glory..!!!

[Undying Glory]

great writing here, i sure love this poem a lot. this was real vivid and i just love those last two verses, they were the best in my opinion. this was very cool and i love the very interesting rhyming here. good job!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Lutz Sir..!!!!

[D.J. Lutz]

Excellent. I have had to read this three times. First just to experience it, second to see if I understand any more of it and finally, the third time - the best time - was to read it again and put myself into it, experiencing the figurative flower, wrapped in a bright sunny ray. This, using so few words, conveys much to me, and probably to many people. And that, in my opinion, makes for a great bit of writing. Well done!