'Massacre Ground..'
A Poem by
Priyankaabhilaashi
People cannot stay quiet..
...
"Lonely nights make you miserable. .
Make sure, you stay comfortable..
People are born to massacre around..
And bash the happiness ground..!!"
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© 2011 Priyankaabhilaashi
Reviews
deep and intriguing work, this sure was very cool and thought-provoking. i just love this a lot, and i think this was a very good reflection of our lives today. brilliant writing!
Posted 14 Years Ago
I agree, the squeaky wheel gets the grease!
Posted 14 Years Ago
I agree, the squeaky wheel gets the grease!
so sad, but a great piece
Posted 14 Years Ago
so sad, but a great piece
intriguing piece, small but good...
Posted 14 Years Ago
intriguing piece, small but good...
Thank you Sarah Willingham..!!!
Posted 14 Years Ago
Thank you Sarah Willingham..!!!
Wow this is really interesting
Posted 14 Years Ago
Wow this is really interesting
Thank You Cherrie Palmer Madam..!!!
Posted 14 Years Ago
Thank You Cherrie Palmer Madam..!!!
I'm lost with in this piece. I look for the window or the door but cannot find it.
The flow is good but the means is a rifle
Posted 14 Years Ago
I'm lost with in this piece. I look for the window or the door but cannot find it.
The flow is good but the means is a rifle
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Added on January 24, 2011
Last Updated on January 24, 2011
Author
Priyankaabhilaashi Jaipur, India
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A traveller by choice..A writer by soul..!!!!
A freelance writer..A Doctorate..A Management Graduate..!!!!! Born and brought up in Jaipur, The Pink City.
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