'Massacre Ground..'

People cannot stay quiet..

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"Lonely nights make you miserable..

Make sure, you stay comfortable..

People are born to massacre around..

And bash the happiness ground..!!"

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Reviews

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Stefanie..!!

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Thank you Angelina Paige..!!

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Thank you Marie Harrison..!!

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Thank you Sweets..!!

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Thank you Undying Glory..!!

[Sweets]

Short, simple, and beautiful!
Perfect use of rhymes.
I loved it!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Charles..!!

[Charles]

Interesting word play (the way massacre and happiness are used). Good job with such a short poem. :-)

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Cynthia..!!

[Cynthia]

short ,simple but yet very deep write!
the rhyme of this poem makes it really nice to be read with!
I just love it!