'Some Dreams..'

Attitude of Adjustment..

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"Some dreams remain dream..
Some memories live long..
Destiny has its own shape..
People, simply, go wrong..!!"

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Reviews

[D.J. Lutz]

Excellent. In seventeen words you have explained the reason behind most of the world's problems. If only we all could read *and heed* your poem!

[sarah]

so short but so stunning great job

[Nothing Personal]

Dreams Die
Fools Fly
Live life
but never say goodbye

Never say adieu to dreams , dreams are what we live for , our every moment of existence thrives on it..A realization that we compromise and adjust is painstaking but true. Nice poem. Great subject. Good work.

[Sweets]

This is so creative :)
Great work!

[roarke]

pretty much captures it in a nutshell. These days it's all just redundant.

[Cynthia]

wow! Short, simple, yet such a amazing work!

[Coyote Poetry]

Last line is fact. Easy to fall upon the wrong road or make a wrong decision. Great poetry. You said it all in 17 words. A outstanding poem.
Coyote