'Be Mine..'

'Be Mine..'

A Poem by Priyankaabhilaashi
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Evacuating differences and lightning up a new light..

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"My nights and blues..
'Can we use some glues'..
Translating few stories..
May light up new glories..

Lovely verdicts lasts long..
Mustard uttering candy song..
Rubbing an Ayurved herb..
Time to patch the rough turf..

Issue needs to be dumped..
Happiness needs to be pumped..
Gush in, My Sweet Pineapple..
Time to locate unheard chapel..

Being secluded on cosy night does pay..
Imagine sun without the lovely ray..
Get in now the shades and be mine..
Who knows how long will moon shine..!!"

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© 2010 Priyankaabhilaashi


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Good visions create by your words. Many strong statements in the poem I likes.
"Rubbing an Ayurved herb..
Time to patch the rough turf.."
A amazing poem. I love powerful words. This outstanding poem I had to read a few times.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


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i really liked the poem...it came from your heart & soul..
good work:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thank you storiesotell..!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Deep and powerful wording!
Issu needs to be dumped..
Happiness needs to be pumped..
Favorite lines!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thank You Mr. Lutz..!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice. I have read this one several times and have come up with a different meaning each time. That is the beauty of this poem, I think. Thank you for not spelling out your intentions directly; thought-provoking literature has more impact!



Posted 13 Years Ago


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Added on December 22, 2010
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Priyankaabhilaashi

Jaipur, India



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A traveller by choice..A writer by soul..!!!! A freelance writer..A Doctorate..A Management Graduate..!!!!! Born and brought up in Jaipur, The Pink City. You may read me here also: http://enri.. more..

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