'Whisper sheer raw..'

'A Lovely Bonding..amidst a Warm Night..!!!'

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"Few exotic fragrance..

Few floral reference..

Folding cold difference..

Warming up the mantle..

Inhaling intoxicated handle..

Fables rule feverish rental..

Exuberant Blackberry Cookie..

Philosophical passionate Bookie..

'Whisper sheer raw, my Rookie'..

Out-gunning joyous light..

Breaking shackles tonight..

Dwelling amusing fight..

A pre-functional tile..

Happily untraveled file..

Jigging journey smile..

Invincible constructive faith..

'Ah! You are illuminative, mate'..

'Hold me, you are already late..'

A Midnight creamy affair..

Perching pure unheard layer..

Stroking her long wavy hair..

Grooving authority released..

Intelligent mimicry unleashed..

Uncomfortable bends deceased..

Soft, silky, gentle tranquilizer..

'Your touch is truly energizer'..

'Endure peace and relax, my dumb miser'..

Fulfill gratifying plum-cake..

Lying by a profound lake..

Time ripe for smooth serene bake..

As we lay by each other..

Intensity slices further..

Sparkling blossom budder..

Curly sheets and rejoicing feet..

Creating some memorable feat..

Crushed mystified wrinkled heat..!!!"

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Reviews

[Liza]

nice pick on words - the rhyme made sense and flowed unexpectedly - great job.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This was some intense work.
Originality really made this work.
Nice Teknik.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thanks Sarah..!!

[sarah]

This is great! it is truly unique! and wonderful, great job.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Charles..!!

[Charles]

Interesting style - I'll have to read more to appreciate the complexity of each stanza. Nice work.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Stefanie..!!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Amanda..!!

[Stef Outsiders]

wow, crafted words and rhymes beautifully...

[Amanda]

It flowed nicely. Beautiful imagery. Thank you for sharing! :)