'Whisper sheer raw..'

'Whisper sheer raw..'

A Poem by Priyankaabhilaashi
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'A Lovely Bonding..amidst a Warm Night..!!!'

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"Few exotic fragrance..
Few floral reference..
Folding cold difference..

Warming up the mantle..
Inhaling intoxicated handle..
Fables rule feverish rental..

Exuberant Blackberry Cookie..
Philosophical passionate Bookie..
'Whisper sheer raw, my Rookie'..

Out-gunning joyous light..
Breaking shackles tonight..
Dwelling amusing fight..

A pre-functional tile..
Happily untraveled file..
Jigging journey smile..

Invincible constructive faith..
'Ah! You are illuminative, mate'..
'Hold me, you are already late..'

A Midnight creamy affair..
Perching pure unheard layer..
Stroking her long wavy hair..

Grooving authority released..
Intelligent mimicry unleashed..
Uncomfortable bends deceased..

Soft, silky, gentle tranquilizer..
'Your touch is truly energizer'..
'Endure peace and relax, my dumb miser'..

Fulfill gratifying plum-cake..
Lying by a profound lake..
Time ripe for smooth serene bake..

As we lay by each other..
Intensity slices further..
Sparkling blossom budder..

Curly sheets and rejoicing feet..
Creating some memorable feat..
Crushed mystified wrinkled heat..!!!"

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© 2010 Priyankaabhilaashi


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Thank you Arsenic Nemesis..!!

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Thank you Angelina Paige..!!

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yes very well written, i like this.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful, this is really well written! An awesome choice of words and that last stanza is just brilliant, a very well presented piece too. Great job here, keep it up!~

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Thank you Mr. Roarke..!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


poetic abstraction is akin to jazz improvisation. This reflects the spirit of a true Bard. It's enjoyable to read because the poet enjoyed conjuring the words together. Pure abstraction is open to all interpretations.

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Thank you Jemma..!!

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Great flow of words. It just rolls of your tongue.

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Priyankaabhilaashi

Jaipur, India



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A traveller by choice..A writer by soul..!!!! A freelance writer..A Doctorate..A Management Graduate..!!!!! Born and brought up in Jaipur, The Pink City. You may read me here also: http://enri.. more..

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