'Pervade Me..'

'Reliving passion, maturity, understanding and sensitivity..!!'

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"As i breath and stand on the crossroad..

Leaves sway by, even the lightest load..

Whispering through the sieve of moonlight..

Intensity unravels the depth of height..

Deep intense rolling hills, often close doorways.. 

Sparkling Innocence scatter evenly on highways..

Gathering an extra pounce of power..

Dismantling an era of egoistic tower..

A bewildering bright beam reflecting landscape..

Do i need to unwrap for another escape..

Come back, My Pineapple Rainbow, let us stumble again..

Permit me, pervade me, gather me, transform me into rain..!!!"

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Reviews

[Randolf Ramos]

"As i breath and stand on the crossroad..
Leaves sway by, even the lightest load..
Whispering through the sieve of moonlight..
Intensity unravels the depth of height..
Deep intense rolling hills, often close doorways..
Sparkling Innocence scatter evenly on highways..
Gathering an extra pounce of power..
Dismantling an era of egoistic tower..
A bewildering bright beam reflecting landscape..
Do i need to unwrap for another escape..

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Great write!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Ms. Starrleena Magyck..!!!

[A Soap Mess Stories]

breathtaking...

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Mr. Tate Morgan..!!!

[Tate Morgan]

Ah to be bathed in the moonlight and succumb to its madness

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Ms. Sarah...!!!

[sarah]

This is just a really great write full of powerful emotions it is great

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Mr. Roarke..!!

[roarke]

In this sense, pervade me, realizing the connected oneness. Your themes of rain, rainbows, oneness, nature. I see at the cross roads that no matter how tall the urban "tower" gets, nature will always pervade it. Being so, we all have to make choices...
that's how this piece reads to me. Nice artistic write.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank You StacyPerry..!!

[StacyPerry]

I found this to be an interesting write as there could be a sponge bob reference if you look close enough. [smile]