'New Sun..'

An awakening for thy men to rise against atrocities and disbeliefs..!!

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"Instrumental muse on indigenous traditions..
Inhibited freedom conceived splendid courage..
Aggravating religious sentiments on opposed belief..
Ripples famed for provocation and hard-liners relief..
Disguising the destination of the kickbacks..
A well-oiled network ensconced successive blows..
Jargon exhaling jingoism..persecuted figures..
Patriotism in question, juggled and tumbled..
A fresh lease on an alleviated tangent..
Kites and vultures staunch revolution..
Rise again, against sycophants..My countrymen!
Embark a new sun on the horizon of My Land..!!!"

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is powerful and the language amazing. Hard to get over the B.S we must be forced to believe. It would take anyone one look at our budget to understand where the problem is. Last year the House of Rep. spend 1.2 billion dollars on office and secretaries. 2.3 per Representative. My state of Michigan have 18. 40 million dollars for government. You are correct. Time for common men to rise. Less government is the answer. A outstanding poem. You made me think.
Coyote

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Ms. blessins..!!!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you..Serpent..!!!

[serpent]

nicely put!
they way you have penned the importance of common men to rise and fight is really inspiring. Its time that we stop fighting like kids for ice-cream and unite in one common interest.
excellent write!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Coyote..!!!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you..'Nothing Personal'..!!!

[Nothing Personal]

How we waste our time fighting over petty issues forgetting the very reasons our forefathers died for. How pointless religious fanaticism is? Yes an awakening is dire necessary when a civilization declines as they lose sight of their objectivity . Very well written. Very good language. Well Done !!