'Take Me Into Your Shell..'

..A call for reunion..after a small argument..

...

"Waves were high and the moon was dim..
Desert was aloof and the sky was on rim..
Looked far beyond, no one was to be seen..
My heart relaxed, because you are my only dean..

Dreams are dew-drops..melts with burning sun..
You stood by my side..in the worse and best run..
Completed the horizon..painted the starry night..
You postulated the weeds..into a beautiful sight..

You are my string..that needs no wing..
The moment you hold me, birds will sing..
Worldly war left aloof the jam-packed audi..
Your Fragrance mystified even the dead body..

You gave me a reason to replenish my thoughts..
Were you the creator of my late night creative lots..
Alas! I could rewrite my name with your single touch..
Prompting rains to lean into my window that much..

You are my life, you are the exquisite bouquet's garden..
Immerse into me, take away the breath, O My Warden..
Love you my 'Honey', take me back into your arm..
Adrenalin calls, 'Hey..only you can make me warm'..!!

Forgive me..for all the mistakes..accept me once again..
Praying today to the Divine, let this issue not regain..
Take me back into your shell and love me forever..!"


... 

Reviews

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Awesome write with excellent imagery!

[Charles]

This is a great little poem for the images and theme. There are a few too many glitches in the grammar and so on to make it a comfortable read. With a little polishing along these lines, you's have a real winner here.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Ms. Angelina Paige..!!!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Mr. Roarke..!!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

I am in love with this poem!

[roarke]

You have a very unique way with catching an image. There was one line in each stanza that created a question in my mind if there might be something else in the background of this ode... an original composition to be sure.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Mr. Coyote..!!

[Coyote Poetry]

A very beautiful poem. The words were gentle and powerful at the same time. Sometime we wish to said less and always be kind. I like the story in the poem and the excellent ending. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Ms. Stefanie..!!

[Stef Outsiders]

I like that last line 'Take me back into your shell and love me forever'
again your writing amazes me...