'Only Abode..'

Asking someone 'Special' to take you back..!!

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"Think me around the courtyard..
 Inhale me as an exotic floral-ward..
Make me your only abode, never part ways..

Dress me on a caresses platter..
Color me through the shiny flatter..
Make me your only abode, never part ways..

Encrust me on the collage of cherry-tree ..
Sail me through the drowning fun-spree ..
Make me your only abode, never part ways..

Swing me around the twinkling shore..
Tide me by the fine drapery of shackling-ore..
Make me your only abode, never part ways..

Soften me with mounds of hybrid crops..
Dissolve me with million tear-drops..
Make me your only abode, never part ways.. !!!"


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Reviews

[Charles]

My comments here are much like those for the last review. Good images, though the logic (sense) of some of the comparisons makes me wonder, and the grammar needs work. Good effort.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Mr. Coyote..!!!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Mr. Roarke..!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing and beautiful words. I had to read a few times to enjoy the usage of language and story. The poem told a very good story. I like the last lines.
"Soften me with mounds of hybrid crops..
Dissolve me with million tear-drops..
Make me your only abode, never part ways.. !!!""
A excellent poem.
Coyote

[roarke]

Is this the earth asking humanity to take it back?

if so, interesting.
Quite abstract, a collage of metaphor, a suggestion of the cosmic.
you write with a fresh perspective that's always original.