'Only Abode..'
A Poem by
Priyankaabhilaashi
Asking someone 'Special' to take you back..!!
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"Think me around the courtyard..
Inhale me as an exotic floral-ward..
Make me your only abode , never part ways ..
Dress me on a caresses platter..
Color me through the shiny flatter..
Make me your only abode , never part ways ..
Encrust me on the collage of cherry-tree ..
Sail me through the drowning fun-spree ..
Make me your only abode , never part ways ..
Swing me around the twinkling shore..
Tide me by the fine drapery of shackling-ore..
Make me your only abode, never part ways..
Soften me with mounds of hybrid crops..
Dissolve me with million tear-drops..
Make me your only abode , never part ways .. !!!"
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© 2010 Priyankaabhilaashi
Reviews
Thank you Ms. Starrleena Magyck..!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Touching and beautiful
Posted 13 Years Ago
Touching and beautiful
Thank you Ms. Jeny..!!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Thank you Ms. Jeny..!!!
Wow….
A very wonderful touching song….
Read it two times….
I appreciate the poet you are….
Posted 13 Years Ago
Wow….
A very wonderful touching song….
Read it two times….
I appreciate the poet you are….
This is a nice poem, with a lilting, whimsical rhyme and rhythm, which makes it feel like a lullaby, or possibly, a love song delicately balladeer-ed beneath a balcony :-)
Sweet, delicate, and ethereal, nice classic style descriptives, romantic write!
Posted 13 Years Ago
This is a nice poem, with a lilting, whimsical rhyme and rhythm, which makes it feel like a lullaby, or possibly, a love song delicately balladeer-ed beneath a balcony :-)
Sweet, delicate, and ethereal, nice classic style descriptives, romantic write!
Thank you Liza with a Z!!!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Thank you Liza with a Z!!!!
wow = what a way to consume one with all of you - a surrender to being loved - a sign of trust
Posted 13 Years Ago
wow = what a way to consume one with all of you - a surrender to being loved - a sign of trust
Thank you Arsenic Nemesis..!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Thank you Arsenic Nemesis..!!
Nice wording in this, I actually really enjoyed it - and the rhyming was nicely done too, great job!~
Posted 13 Years Ago
Nice wording in this, I actually really enjoyed it - and the rhyming was nicely done too, great job!~
Thank you Sherbz..!!!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Thank you Sherbz..!!!
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Added on September 20, 2010
Last Updated on September 20, 2010
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Priyankaabhilaashi Jaipur, India
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A traveller by choice..A writer by soul..!!!!
A freelance writer..A Doctorate..A Management Graduate..!!!!! Born and brought up in Jaipur, The Pink City.
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