'Only Abode..'

'Only Abode..'

A Poem by Priyankaabhilaashi
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Asking someone 'Special' to take you back..!!

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"Think me around the courtyard..
 Inhale me as an exotic floral-ward..
Make me your only abode
, never part ways..

Dress me on a caresses platter..
Color me through the shiny flatter..
Make me your only abode, never part ways..

Encrust me on the collage of cherry-tree ..
Sail me through the drowning fun-spree ..
Make me your only abode, never part ways..

Swing me around the twinkling shore..
Tide me by the fine drapery of shackling-ore..
Make me your only abode, never part ways..

Soften me with mounds of hybrid crops..
Dissolve me with million tear-drops..
Make me your only abode, never part ways.. !!!"


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© 2010 Priyankaabhilaashi


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Thank you Ms. Starrleena Magyck..!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Touching and beautiful

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thank you Ms. Jeny..!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow….
A very wonderful touching song….
Read it two times….
I appreciate the poet you are….


Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a nice poem, with a lilting, whimsical rhyme and rhythm, which makes it feel like a lullaby, or possibly, a love song delicately balladeer-ed beneath a balcony :-)
Sweet, delicate, and ethereal, nice classic style descriptives, romantic write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thank you Liza with a Z!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow = what a way to consume one with all of you - a surrender to being loved - a sign of trust

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thank you Arsenic Nemesis..!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice wording in this, I actually really enjoyed it - and the rhyming was nicely done too, great job!~

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thank you Sherbz..!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on September 20, 2010
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Priyankaabhilaashi

Jaipur, India



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A traveller by choice..A writer by soul..!!!! A freelance writer..A Doctorate..A Management Graduate..!!!!! Born and brought up in Jaipur, The Pink City. You may read me here also: http://enri.. more..

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