'Only Abode..'

Asking someone 'Special' to take you back..!!

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"Think me around the courtyard..
 Inhale me as an exotic floral-ward..
Make me your only abode, never part ways..

Dress me on a caresses platter..
Color me through the shiny flatter..
Make me your only abode, never part ways..

Encrust me on the collage of cherry-tree ..
Sail me through the drowning fun-spree ..
Make me your only abode, never part ways..

Swing me around the twinkling shore..
Tide me by the fine drapery of shackling-ore..
Make me your only abode, never part ways..

Soften me with mounds of hybrid crops..
Dissolve me with million tear-drops..
Make me your only abode, never part ways.. !!!"


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Reviews

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Ms. Starrleena Magyck..!!

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Touching and beautiful

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Ms. Jeny..!!!

[JENY]

Wow….
A very wonderful touching song….
Read it two times….
I appreciate the poet you are….

[Zoe Jay]

This is a nice poem, with a lilting, whimsical rhyme and rhythm, which makes it feel like a lullaby, or possibly, a love song delicately balladeer-ed beneath a balcony :-)
Sweet, delicate, and ethereal, nice classic style descriptives, romantic write!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Liza with a Z!!!!

[Liza]

wow = what a way to consume one with all of you - a surrender to being loved - a sign of trust

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Arsenic Nemesis..!!

[Arsenic Nemesis]

Nice wording in this, I actually really enjoyed it - and the rhyming was nicely done too, great job!~

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you Sherbz..!!!