'Starry Sky..'

Emotions at times results into surprise and at other times, they deprive of the emotions itself..

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"As he laid back on the terrace to have a view of the open crystal-embedded starry sky, the cellphone disturbed the melody Sam was immersed into. Shaina was on the other side, expressing her inability to move out of this beautiful relationship that both Shaina & Sam cultivated out of the initial forays. 

Life has been cruel.. Yes, it was!! 

Shaina's voice said it all..there was something more that prompted such words to gush into this technology and forced Sam's heart to sink.. Alas! this emotionless technology could weave in some cozy moments for the shattered Shaina and heart-broken Sam..

Shaina disconnected the call and wiped her tears, for it was not easy to smile on the eve of her life's last night..!! This third-stage cancer took away all the Shiny glory of crystal-embedded starry sky..!!"

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Author's Note

First attempt at Short Stories Series..

Reviews

[Penny]

Though the plot is used perhaps overused, you still make it sound novel and interesting, in a way that we read till the last line. Its a quality not possessed by many writers. Well done.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thanks Ms. Penny for your honest review.. Keep visiting.. :-)

[Penny]

My pleasure.

[stars are far]

that was well done ..
you are starting well

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thank you stars are far..!!

[Dayran]

The stars sometimes promise much more to life ... well told.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thanks Dayran..!!

[roarke]

Intense and emotional. Take a look at the first paragraph, I might shorten some sentences, leading into the phone ringing. Otherwise, a good capture of a moment.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thanks so much, Mr. Roarke..! It definitely will help in creating better shores next time..!!

[Rachelle]

Bittersweet and melancholic

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Thanks Ms. Rachelle..!!!