Regret Love and Success

sadness is often followed by happiness

Sorrow pain regret despair

She Felt her life had no repair,

Everything seemed to have come to an end

But nothing happened, she had to pretend,

Giving up on life she lay with no hope

Her life was left like a filthy dope,

But sadness doesn’t last for a long time they say

Hoped she would get her happiness someday,

The day was not far wen her wish came true

The wind of happiness finally blew,

He entered her life with a charm on his face

And brightened it up in a very fast pace,

Friend was just she considered him to be

Never realized what she felt for him truly,

He asked her out but she said she would think

She thought being single was just her thing,

Thinking for hours she realized what she felt

Had no idea how d matter had to b dealt,

She thought for long and days went by

She finally decided she would reply,

She went to him and confessed her love

He jumped about like a crazy dove,

Every time they met they assured each other

Always in life they would b together,

Not only  love  but also bends

Lets see where their story ends.

Reviews

[Kruppz]

'Love is Solace' could be a better title. Just my opinion.
Caveat: Know what you seek in love. Is it escape from worries & life's hardships? Or is it admiration of qualities of the one you think you love? Find your own answers.

Poem has a nice flow. You seem to be a teenager.

[Dushyant Thadani]

Brilliant write... Just love the moody transitions... Great job Priyanka :D :D...

[Akshat♥]

I hope this story will end in true love forever...
I mean hope for the best and prepare for the worst..
First step of meeting is good but be next steps are not easy to take..
Nice write..I enjoyed reading it:)