MY LAST NIGHT

I HAD ALMOST A GOOD TIME WITH HIM WHEN HE STARTED TO IGNORE ME.

 MADE ME FELT LIKE I WAS NOTHING TO HIM.

I LOVED HIM LIKE ANYTHING.

HE WAS EVERYTHING FOR ME.

I RISKED MY EXAMS,MY CAREER FOR HIM.

HE CALLED ME UP LAST NIGHT TO TELL ME THAT HE IS NOT SURE ABOUT OUR RELATION BECAUSE HE CARES MORE ABOUT HIS PARENTS THEN ME.

SO HE DECIDED TO END THINGS UP.

JUST BECAUSE OF MY FEW MISTAKES I WAS THROWN AWAY FROM HIS LIFE.

DON'T KNOW HE EVEN REALIZES HOW I AM FEELING NOW,

 MAYBE HE DOESN'T BECAUSE MAYBE HE DIDN'T LOVED ME IN THE FIRST PLACE.

MAYBE IT WAS MY LAST NIGHT WITH HIM,

THE LAST NIGHT WHERE I TALKED WITH HIM AND NOW I HAVE BEEN LEFT ALONE SITTING IN ONE CONNER THINKING WHY MY LIFE IS SUCH A BIG HELL 

Reviews

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

Oh Priya,
This story of a broken heart is more of a revealing of bad judgement on the part of the narrator than love gone wrong. You seem very smart so I hope you intended it that way. This story is packed with emotion, I like that. I think that many young ladies will identify with the feelings. I would have liked to seen a bit of positive guidance for them at the end. Do you know what I mean? To help them recover their self esteem. Love is a wonderful feeling if it is used wisely. You can't trust everyone with your money, it is the same for your heart.

[Goku Rd]

Nice plot, I think it would have been nice for you to develop the characters a little more and describe a bit more of her life

[Priya Nair]

THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR YOUR REVIEW