THE UNFORGETTABLE DAY

                    ITS 25TH JUNE WHEN HER DAD LEFT HER WITH HER MOM.THIS DAY MOSTLY USED TO BE THE WORST DAY FOR HER. SHE WENT COLLEGE AND ON HER WAY SHE SAW ERIC.SHE WAS QUITE HAPPY TO SEE HIM ON SUCH A DAY.HE WAS ACTUALLY WAITING FOR ONE OF HIS COLLEAGUE .SHE WENT TO HIM AND SAID," HI ERIC,WHAT YOU DOING HERE ALONE??".HE SAID,"ACTUALLY I AM WAITING FOR ONE OF MY COLLEAGUE BUT SEEMS LIKE HE'S GOING TO BE LATE.SO UR ON YOUR WAY TO COLLEGE RIGHT?? I CAN DROP YOU TILL THERE".SHE SAID,"YA,BUT IT WOULD BE A PROBLEM FOR YOU AS YOUR  COLLEAGUE MIGHT SHOW UP ANYTIME HERE." HE DIDN'T EVEN ALLOWED ME TO COMPLETE MY SENTENCE HE CALLED HIS  COLLEAGUE AND TOLD HIM HE WOULD BE LATE BECAUSE HE HAS SOME WORK. THEN HE DROPPED HER TILL HER COLLEGE.GETTING OUT OF THE CAR SHE SAID THANKS TO HIM FOR DROPPING HER. ALL OF A SUDDEN ERIC SAID,"HEY LINA ARE YOU FREE THIS EVENING?? IF YOU ARE THEN WE CAN GO OUT SOMEWHERE??". SHE SAID,"YA I AM.AND I DON'T WANT TO STAY AT MY HOUSE FOR TODAY YOU KNOW ABOUT DAD AND MOM..".HE SAID,"I KNOW HOW YOUR FEELING NOW BUT HEY WE'LL GO OUT IN EVENING OK!! I'LL TELL YOUR MOM ABOUT IT AND WILL COME TO PICK YOU UP AFTER COLLEGE IF THAT'S FINE WITH YOU??".SHE SAID,"YA SURE.WILL BE WAITING FOR EVENING".THAT'S WHEN ONE OF CLASSMATE CALLED HER SHE SAID TO ERIC,"HEY I THINK I SHOULD GO NOW.BYE AND SEE YOU IN THE EVENING " EVEN HE SAID BYE TO HER SHE AND HER CLASSMATES WENT INSIDE THE COLLEGE AND THEN HE TOO LEFT THE PLACE

                       COLLEGE LIFE WAS QUITE A HELL FOR HER ESPECIALLY THE PROFESSORS THEY WERE LIKE HELL.TODAY SHE GOT A PLACE AT THE LAST BENCH NEARBY THE WINDOW BECAUSE SHE WAS BIT LATE.IT WAS A BORING LECTURE GOING ON AND SHE WAS JUST THINKING ABOUT HOW HAPPY SHE WAS FOR A MOMENT WHEN SHE WAS WITH HIM AND THAT TOO IN SUCH A WORSE DAY.SHE WAS THINKING LIKE HE IS SUCH A NICE GUY ALWAYS BE GOOD WITH HER NEVER LETS HER TOO BE ALONE AND BE SAD ABOUT ANYTHING. MAYBE SHE LIKES HIM MUCH MORE THAN A FRIEND OR MAY BE SHE IS IN LOVE WITH HIM.THAT'S WHEN A THOUGHT CAME INTO HER MIND LIKE HE LIKES HER CARES ABOUT HER BECAUSE THEY WERE GOOD FRIEND AND HE MIGHT NOT BE HAVE SUCH A FEELING FOR HER AND WHY WOULD SUCH A GOOD LOOKING GUY FALL FOR HER.THAT'S WHEN HER PROFESSOR SAW HER AND SCOLDED HER AND TOLD TO MEET HER AFTER COLLEGE.

                       NOTHING CAN BE MUCH WORSE THAN THIS LISTENING TO PROFESSORS LECTURES ABOUT NOT BEING ATTENTIVE AND THEN MEETING HIM.IT TOOK A LONG TIME FOR HER PROFESSOR TO END HER LECTURES SHE CAME OUT AND THERE HE WAS STANDING WITH A SMILE IN HIS FACE. SHE LOVED THE WAY HE USED TO SMILE. HE SAID," SEEMS LIKE YOU PROFESSOR GAVE YOU QUITE A LONG LECTURE FOR BEING NOT ATTENTIVE".SHE SAID,"HOW DO YOU KNOW THAT??"HE SMILED AT HER AND SAID,"I KNOW YOU FROM A VERY LONG TIME.I KNOW YOU MUCH MORE THAN YOU KNOW ABOUT YOURSELF".SHE DIDN'T SAID ANYTHING AND SAT INSIDE THE CAR.THEY FIRST WENT TO A PLACE NEARBY THEN THEY DROVE TO ANOTHER PLACE WHERE NEVER WENT BEFORE

                       SHE DIDN'T CARED ABOUT THE PLACE MUCH ALL SHE KNEW SHE WAS WITH HIM. AND HOW HER WORSE DAY WAS GOING GOOD BECAUSE OF HIM.THE PLACE WAS SOMEWHERE NEAR THE UPHILL THERE THEY STOPPED AND IT WAS ALMOST NIGHT AND SHE COULD SHE THE WHOLE TOWN WITH GLITTERING LIGHT FROM THERE SHE WAS DAMN HAPPY SHE DIDN'T KNEW HOW TO THANK HIM FOR SUCH A GOOD PRESENT. THIS MOMENT WAS UNFORGETTABLE MOMENT FOR HER 

Reviews

[KeeD]

I see you possess a passion for writing. Your sentence structure isn't fully complete with a few grammatical errors. The plot was a very effective story about young love and infatuation for a friend. Good job keep writing so you can further improve your skills :) much respect, kee

[Priya Nair]

Thank you keegan for you view.i'll do my best to improve it as i am new to this writing field i don't have much idea about it but trying my best to write anyways thanks :)