Eternal sunshine:)

Memories always disappear with time,

They become a part of your spotless mind,

After stopping the mind which wanders,

Wanders in depth of moon lit sky,

Making attempt to forget the unspoken plight,

Thinking of rainy dark nights and all the lonely sighs,

Concluding to erase those cries is what the heart tries,

Dreaming of bright day and lovely sunshine,

Soon becomes the eternity of lost mind,

Keeping the promise to hold on ,

Through all the sharp edges of life,

Keeping the curse of life alive,

Giving birth to new dream of happiness,

Having new phase of enlightened sunshine..

Reviews

[Hoosier Belle]

Through all the sharp edges of life,
Keeping the curse of life alive,
Giving birth to new dream of happiness,
Having new phase of enlightened sunshine..

I felt these words were really moving and hoinest. I could feel the heartfelt words pour out. I love this write alot. I can relate to some of it. Wonderful write!

[GridLok]

Hi, alegria! Your poetry has certainly come a long way … intriguing imagery arises from your words e.g. "Memories always disappear with time, / They become a part of your spotless mind, / After stopping the mind which wanders, / Wanders in depth of moon lit sky, …". Perhaps the fourth line might read a little better if it went … "Wanders in depths of moon-lit sky"; but that is a very small point.

[Dove]

Brilliantly and truly written. I love it.

[Shafeeq Valanchery]

I like this one

[Dayran]

Because the heart hurts, we distance ourself from it. What we ought to do is to bring the reason of the mind to heal it and restore it to its original involvement in our affairs.

[alegria]

plz give honest reviews..help me improve ma poems..:)

[Boldpen]

WOW!!!! How truly written.
This creation of yours just gave us a factual message in such a pretty way. This needs a lot of experience and Talent to do!
Very nicely Done and really, a very enlightening work indeed.
Great write.