broken strings of her life..

pain of a gal in her words...and how after a broken dream came a new one..

she lived the reality and the pain,
counted all the tears in the rain,
all alone she lasted the fall,
feeling of betryal of her love,

though he cheated and lied,
she still had love in her eyes,
all memories which got her smiles,
were now just tears in her eyes,

even though darkness was all over the place,
she never gave up on her faith,
all she knew was she was true,
and the past you can never undo,

she trembled all nits in fear,
the past momories haunted her here,
wished to go away from the broken dream,
lived on the very last hope of rain,

alas the clouds washed her pain,
came the sunshine along the window pane,
the day was bright and sky was clear,
she stepped out without fear,

for exploring her new dream,
she went out with her heart clean,
love doesnt die ever it remains,
but show it only to the one worth the pain..

Author's Note

one of ma best poems till now i feel...i hope u liked it:)

Reviews

[Siena - Silent Awakenin..]

Now this is my kind of poem! You did a great job... The second line of the 5th stanza really got to me :') And I love the title.
The only thing I can suggest for improvement is certain words such as: 'd' 'jus' and 'tho' that you could correct.
This is only a suggestion as it is your poem!

[Trixx_Gnzlz]

amazing

[Larry Dyson]

rain and tears are your metaphor for this well written piece ....to show the love between two...

[futurepast.]

This shows the cycle of love, heartbreaks, and moving on, and you drew it nicely. A girl being broken after love, being in the dark, and in the end, sunshine comes out and she dreams again. Well pictured.

[Akshat♥]

I agree with you..this is one of your best poems:)
poem is excellent..she was cheated and still loved him..
that's why love is so true and pure..
you always belief in your love no matter what:(
Keep writing...

[Dayran]

An important lesson learnt. The loss of spontaneity in love is a gain to the wisdom in the reason, and reason still flows with poetry.

[Dove]

This is an amzing poem. You did an fantastic job on this. I loved it.