why?...

why is it so hard to let go off pain?

why does all the effort ultimately end up in vain?

why do i not feel my skin?

why do i feel its all dead within?

why is the broken heart still crying for help?

why isnt anybody there to hear it sing?

why is there love all over the place and still sadness deep down within?

Reviews

[Dayran]

Only 7 questions. Not too much in pain, I take it. A poem of the broken heart.

[Akshat♥]

I love the poem..
Sometimes these kind of things happen to us
that we can't help it out...
we always ask this question "why" this happen to me..
Keep Writing:)

[Dove]

I love how the whole poem is filled with questions and the poem itself is like a question. Good job

[alegria]

thanku:)

[Clever Forever]

This is really meaningful. I like the repetitive use of questions, and how the whole poem itself is a question. It's very well written.