Tangible Reality

Silence of the dark blue sky,

Dreams of the wide open eye,

Stars shining in the lap of sorrow,

Fate looming through the misty tomorrow!

 

Birdies flutter out to fly,

Waves break out to the shore to die,

Design the miracle you want to be,

Keep it real and set yourself free!

 

 

Reviews

[Dayran]

In the wide open world ... when we look around to see its sights ... we'll not forget the one who lives by the dark blue sky and designs miracles ... for she makes the world special by the way we die and are born into a new experience of looking at the world again with different eyes. Nice write.

[alegria]

thank u for ur lovely review :)

[Cryingkate]

Very Beautifully said
Thank You for penning these thoughts

[alegria]

thank u for ur lovely review... glad u liked it :)

[Jasmine Thurber]

I love your poem!!!! Just reading it sets me free!!! :]

[alegria]

thank u for ur lovely review... glad u liked it :)