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I write this randomly about a boy I "thought" I had loved...

The vibe between you and I was so real that we pushed ourselves away from one another, because the fear of losing each other creeped into our imagination, and the more we gave life to the possibility, we lost each other in the same hopeless place we once found each other.

Reviews

[KCthelastboyscout]

Interesting point of view.more often or not, only at the end do we analyze what went wrong AFTER more than DURING

[Falanne Shanta]

Yeah I agree, because in the end we tend to start thinking about the beginning.

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Short and affecting... left me wanting more, the closing line could stand alone on its on tho. Strong write!

[Falanne Shanta]

Thank you. I appreciate your positive feedback!

[BlackPrince]

This is a sweet, short and powerful love poem dealing with the certain contradictory aspect of love and its various related feelings springing from the heart. We meet people and fall in love, and we are often convinced that we'd spend our lives together, but then things don't turn out the way we originally planned and wished. And that's when even failed relationships, as well as family, work and friends' relationships, also become a learning curb for us. We can choose to be better people after a particular negative situation.
We can learn to be the friend or partner we'd like to see in others, living by example, reciprocally, with effort, since love is a land looked after by two.


WELL DONE

[Falanne Shanta]

Thank you. And yes I couldn't agree with you more. In the end...some things are worth waiting and fighting for, because in the end it will be worth it.