To You

To You

A Poem by P.S.
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This poem I dedicate
To you whose presence makes my heart accelerate
As my inspiration you motivate
M happiness you illuminate
I knew we had to separate 
Because my needs, you couldn't accommodate
Even though my feelings, you were able to emulate
The things you said, you couldn't fabricate
I wish my feelings I could communicate
I wish my love you could validate
I wish we had a relationship to celebrate
But that would only complicate
The agreement in which I agreed to participate
My feelings the agreement didn't eliminate
My feelings refuse to deteriorate
Despite the already three year wait
I never felt that loving you was a mistake
Even though this pain I can't tolerate
I understand that me in your life you can't incorporate
Regardless, you're always my number one candidate
Probably because my heart you captivate
And always cause to palpitate
My mind and body you consistently stimulate and invigorate
My feelings for you constantly accumulate and invigorate
My feelings for you constantly accumulate and elevate
No one can ever imitate or duplicate
No matter how hard they concentrate
Our love they can't lacerate or terminate
My heart no one else can confiscate
The ffort will only demonstrate 
That our passion they can't cause to fluctuate
Our bond they can't penetrate
Our agreement, I'm not trying to debate or renegotiate
My pain, I'm not trying to elaborate 
It's simple, I just want you to know how much I love you before its too late. 

© 2014 P.S.


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Thank you all so much for your comments, they have let me know that I have succeeded in the way that I intended the poem to be. This is one of few poems that I went into writing it with a particular style in mind. Also, as I read it again, I notice a few errors I made with typing- my apologies for that.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I really love the organization of this poem and the way you ended each line like that. It makes the overall poem very rhythmic and enjoyable to read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow, the words are so touching and heartfelt in this expression. Well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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P.S.
P.S.

Westchester County, NY



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A Poem by P.S.