Starry Night

I wrote this while gazing above one night...

The Night is calm and so serene,
From my window it is a glorious scene;
Stars are sprinkled in the Sky,
Makes me yearn to join Them and fly.

Then suddenly I felt the breeze--
On my skin It makes a shivery kiss;
I hug myself with all my might,
as I gaze above--
dazzled by the starry Night!

Reviews

[mystic soul]

great work here!! Through your words i could imagine this glorious scene... stars, sky never fails to amuse me although grown up the child inside me yearns to join them.... This poem is very lovely it reminded me of the time when i used to spend all my time just gazing at the sky!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful description of the starry night. I love the night. The quiet and peace allow the mind to find peace. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

I agree with person below, I am a fan of night time, too, and this poem brought up the feeling of happiness that I feel when I observe the night sky... Makes me sound pretty weird, but anyhow, I love this poem :)

I'm a nocturnal person, so I know how it feels to enjoy a starry night.
Nice poem over all. It paints a picture in my mind, and reminds me of how small we really are in this mysterious universe.

[deeps]

The Night is calm and so serene,
From my window it is a glorious scene;

Such wonderful and amazing words, well i think they are
This is a beuatiful and wonderful write here, amazing write!

[Chaos Complex]

"I hug myself with all my might,
as I gaze above--
dazzled by the starry Night!"
I really loved that part. I get the mental image of a starry night and the feel of a a beautiful scene hitting me when I get a glance of it.
The poems structure is simple and it was really cute. I enjoyed it.