relfection

look at yourself in the mirror,
who is that girl staring back at you?
do you even know her? probably not.
                          THINK.
when did you become her?
    oh yeah...
when you turned your back on God.
stupidgirl.
why would you turn your back on the one who loves you,
more then anyone on earth?
you messed up, kid.
but hey,
keep your head up,
with Him, you're going to go somewhere in life.

Reviews

[Slender Smile/Husna Tay..]

Well.....seems to me like a bout of conscience and self analysis.:)
is there more to it?
very well placed words.....but hey, who's d him in d last sentence?
is it god? or is it someone else?

[Emmie]

I used to think that I was athiest... and part of me still feels that way. It's almost as if I don't know what to believe. I consider myself half christian, half athiest. Which doesn't make too much sense. However, I loved this piece. You have a strong belief and you occupied two stanza's worth of, words of wisdom. Preach on.... and happy writing!