my days with you are now memory.

my days with you are now memory.

A Poem by lightflower14

death!oh death!i curse you death,the one that took my beloved,i chose not to believe you're gone,because no matter where i am,i feel your presence,my nose is crazy,that smells your scent everywhere,my eyes keep deceiving me,into seeing you everyday,though you are gone,but i can still feel you everywhere but cant find you.

© 2015 lightflower14


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thanks junique.I really appreciate it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I know the feeling. A very moving poem. Emotions were expressed in very good detail. Very ggod read

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thanks for your advice and comment i really appreciate it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


You must go into a poetical group here to participate of some competition!

Posted 9 Years Ago


According to my point of view, what you write it is a wonderful poetic prose! Arthur Rimbaud made it with excellence! Go ahead because you write very well : your future is guaranteed in the literary world! 100

Posted 9 Years Ago


great piece of writing. you have done well expressing the anguish of loved one.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is a good poem you have here. I do advise you to apply structure, your poem is worth it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I want review from other writers

Posted 9 Years Ago


I want review from other writer

Posted 9 Years Ago



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lightflower14
lightflower14

ibadan state, south west, Nigeria



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hi everyone!am light,am just 14years.i luv writin despite d fact i want to become a doctor.please take care of me everyone more..

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