Reverie

Sleepy eyes gaze from a distance
Faces so vivid
In seconds, are forgotten
Clothes change each day
Colors bright and sometimes gray
Faces painted
Smudge in the heat
Umbrellas in the rain
Like flowers in spring
Kites fly in the sky
Children chase dragonflies
Leaves fall; trees die
Seeds remain
A new sprout lives
New houses later repainted
Fancy gate now low hedges
Scenery fast moving
But the sky remains unchanged...

Reviews

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Deep read, I enjoyed this alot.

[Cielo Of the Sky]

Thanks. I'm glad you like it ^__^
I don't normally deconstruct sentences but I've realized it's all right to have fragmented poems as long as the thoughts are clear, vivid and poignant.

[C.C. Marx]

beautiful poem! so much details and i absolutely love the last line

[Cielo Of the Sky]

Hi there ^___^
Thanks a lot for the review. I appreciate it =)

[C.C. Marx]

no problem enjoyed it