Her and She

not about me. this is just an experiment poem.

Her and She

were such good friends,

They never liked 

to be apart.

Her broke up

with She one day,

Betraying She's 

poor loyal heart.

Her and She 

had many friends,

they had to

choose a side.

They chose Her

and She was left

with anguished

tears to hide.

Her and She

passed in the hall,

Her gave She

a note.

She opened it,

in blank shock read

the hateful words

Her wrote.

You're stupid, ugly,

mean, and rude,

You're ignorant,

you're cruel,

She, this fight is

all your fault,

you moron, idiot,

fool.

You broke my heart She!

Right in two!

I can't believe 

I cared for you!

two long years 

have passed since then,

maybe even

three,

She's life is

much better now.

I know, 'cause

She, Is Me.

Author's Note

like I said, this didn't actually happen to me, I'm just experimenting with using "Her" and "She" as names. I think it is pretty cool, don't you?

Reviews

[Rieja Thorn]

i love this poem how you used her and she as names instead of pronouns and how you even went the extra mile and rhymed it which is really hard
p.s. i think it's brilliant

[bookworm]

yes i agree with you it is pretty cool awesome job keep it up