Her and She

not about me. this is just an experiment poem.

Her and She

were such good friends,

They never liked 

to be apart.

Her broke up

with She one day,

Betraying She's 

poor loyal heart.

Her and She 

had many friends,

they had to

choose a side.

They chose Her

and She was left

with anguished

tears to hide.

Her and She

passed in the hall,

Her gave She

a note.

She opened it,

in blank shock read

the hateful words

Her wrote.

You're stupid, ugly,

mean, and rude,

You're ignorant,

you're cruel,

She, this fight is

all your fault,

you moron, idiot,

fool.

You broke my heart She!

Right in two!

I can't believe 

I cared for you!

two long years 

have passed since then,

maybe even

three,

She's life is

much better now.

I know, 'cause

She, Is Me.

Author's Note

like I said, this didn't actually happen to me, I'm just experimenting with using "Her" and "She" as names. I think it is pretty cool, don't you?

Reviews

[emma]

an interesting poem. i like what you did with "Her and She". very cool.

[Dearantlers]

It's really interesting how you did the her and she thingy. I like it a lot! It's kinda sad, but in the end it's good. What did She do to get Her to hate her?

[Sylph Drake]

Interesting concept. Clever, clever girl, miss She.

[thoughts of jade]

yes this is pretty cool.. i like this... specially the line,
"She's life is much better now. I know, 'cause She, Is Me.".. it shows that you've truly been able to overcome a painful ordeal in life... Keep on writing!

[Cassey]

Yeah i liked it

[Sigyn]

Very emotional. Very different. I haven't seen a poem like this before. Awesome. Brilliant.

[K8lyn]

Yes its cool! I love the whole concept of the thing. kind of makes you look at the big picture.

[Shiningwolf]

AWWW!!!! Pain and then overcoming it. A nice concept.

[0_o Abbie]

Wow. This hit close to home. Therefore I do believe I'm biased. But I liked it.

[TheMizFit]

This is a beautiful poem. Has a really nice meaning. Simply amazing! Keep it up :)