How It Is

How It Is

A Poem by Jeannear
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life............

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Everything happens for a reason

the good the bad


Everything happens for a reason

the happy the sad


Everything happens for a reason

the heartache the pain


Everything happens for a reason

so why should you complain?

© 2013 Jeannear


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It is okay to complain than move on. I like the old saying. "All perfect plans fall apart." I like the logic and the purpose for the poem. Better to learn from mistakes and move on. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeannear

10 Years Ago

yes very true and I like that saying.....thanks for stopping by



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I like this very much :) wonderful words with an even more wonderful message lol great job kido

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeannear

10 Years Ago

thanks for that comment lol...:))
David Burke

10 Years Ago

you're welcome :)
Words of wisdom...Thank you for sharing...:)...................

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeannear

10 Years Ago

thank you very much...:)
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)....................
This is a good poem, I like it a lot. However there can still be pain... Can't there???

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeannear

10 Years Ago

thank you and yes there can still be pain....it comes along with life's lessons you just gotta know .. read more
Your words are our reality everything does happen for a reason.Did you write the good twice in the first verse on purpose?I love your poem it is great!!!!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeannear

10 Years Ago

thank you so much and thanks for pointing that error out lol I was typing fast and didn't realize it.. read more
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome hon:)
So much truth in these words! Good write :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeannear

10 Years Ago

thank you :)
This poem speaks so much truth, while still seeming to be written with a carefree attitude. In the second line, however, you say "the good the good the bad", but I'm thinking that it's meant to be "the good the bad". I also think that you might put commas between the two things on the second line of every stanza.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeannear

10 Years Ago

thank you for the comment and thanks for pointing out that error I didn't realize it I was typing fa.. read more
Anna Blackburn

10 Years Ago

I've typed too fast many times, sometimes it's like my fingers can't catch up to my thoughts.

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Added on December 2, 2013
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