Together As One

I love the way it feels when we are together 
we have our ups and downs and occasional stormy weather

The way you look at me makes me feel safe and protected
I never want it to end because I know this is what GOD expected

We may argue or fight but that's what some people do
we make up afterwards because we know we're not done or through

I care about you as much as you care about me
when we're together we make one hell of a team

There may be a point where it might get a little rocky
but we have to stay strong and stop the rocks from falling

Sometimes there's a test to show what can be withstood
I know we can pass that test and any test if we could

Our bond is to strong to let anyone come and take it
we're the glue that holds it together and won't let anything break it

It's now time to show that we can always make it
but if I don't have you by my side with me how can we say
we made it.......                 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"We may argue or fight but that's what some people do
we make up afterwards because we know we're not done or through "
The above lines were my favorite. Good days and bad days make us stronger. I like my dear Grandmother words. "Me and Grandpa survived the depression, war and my bad attitude for 60 years. I wouldn't trade away one second." Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Jeannear]

you made my day coyote with your kin words....thank you I appreciate you :)

[Laura Harrison]

Every relationship has its ups and downs but just as long as you both love each other, you can always pull through it. I love the line "There may be a point where it might get a little rocky
but we have to stay strong and stop the rocks from falling." Lovely poem, my friend :)

[Jeannear]

Very true and i love that line as well.....thank you friend :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is what a relationship is ups and downs but confidence in the knowledge that your partner will always be there for you.A very uplifting poem great job!!!!!

[Jeannear]

Your absolutely right that's all apart of being in a relationship.....thank you for the comment i appreciate it....:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome

[Veronica DiMarco]

we're the glue that holds it together and won't let anything break it -- like this part. :)

[Jeannear]

thank you so much...:)

[Sarah]

this is amazing, it made me think about me and by relationship this is so moving!great job!

[Jeannear]

thank you...:)

[Relic]

This is a clear case of love from the heart. You express your feelings well through interesting rhymes.
"we're the glue that holds it together and won't let nothing break it" I would change the word nothing to anything. Just a grammar thing.

[Jeannear]

thank you for that comment I appreciate it and I will make that change it does sound better with ''anything"

[Relic]

You're welcome Jeannear.

[Sarah Lynn]

Another great poem! I really like your writing !

[Jeannear]

you are putting a smile on my face thank you I appreciate it very much

[Joyce S. Greene]

Your love sounds like one worth holding on to, Jeannear. Your commitment shines in each word - may you and he hold on together for a very long time. Very nicely written.

[Jeannear]

hi joyce and thank you very much for your comment...I'm trying to make these words become reality because I am going through a tough time with the person that I am talking about...im hoping things will work out for the better

[Joyce S. Greene]

I wish you happiness, Jeannear. If he isn't the one, there will be many others out there to turn to. But hopefully, your relationship will thrive - it sounds like you are very committed to making that happen.

[Jeannear]

thank you and yes I am very committed....im putting it in GOD's hands

[Sami Khalil]

"Sometimes there's a test to show what can be withstood
I know we can pass that test and any test if we could

Our bond is to strong to let anyone come and take it
we're the glue that holds it together and won't let nothing break it"

A splendid read and write...:)

[Jeannear]

thank you so much that comment means a lot to me...:))))

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)........

[Antoñyo]

A really nice expression of young love at its best and purest.

Thanks for the share

[Jeannear]

thank you and your welcome