Wishing On A Star

Wishing On A Star

A Poem by Jeannear

Look up at the sky and see a star, and make a wish that will guide you far.....

Wish that you see better days

Wish that the pain will go away

Wish for someone who will love you

Wish for happiness and virtue

Wish that all things end up good

Wish that your never misunderstood

Wish for a long and healthy life

Wish for no lonely days or nights

Wish that you will make someone happy one day

Wish that your thought of in every way

Wish for guidance and acceptance from others

Wish that your life will forever have a purpose

© 2013 Jeannear


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A life filled with happiness and purpose...who could ask for more. Well done jeannear.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeannear

10 Years Ago

thank you....:)
And to think, I almost forgot how to throw wishes at stars. Lovely piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeannear

10 Years Ago

thank you so much I appreciate that comment
This simplicity is lovely!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeannear

11 Years Ago

thank you so much
a simple yet beautiful poem, in the last couple of days I remember that I often staring at the night sky from my hospital room

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Jeannear

11 Years Ago

aww thank you for a sweet comment and I hope all is well with you in whatever you are going through .. read more
Such a good wish list, Jeannear. You aren't wishing for material things, but for things that can really make you happy. Says a lot for you - you deserve a very happy life!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeannear

11 Years Ago

I just seen this and thank you very much!
great clarity and good rhyme
i enjoyed reading it

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeannear

11 Years Ago

thank you...:)

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I love to write stories and poetry...This is my first time posting writings on a website so it's is a little new for me but I'm getting use to it...Been on here since 2013 when i was 23yrs old but too.. more..

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