Buffering

Sometime, well quite a lot lately I press lets say on the Home button. Well nothing happens and its just a buffer ? So in the end - the end.

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Why are you so daffy
I send a request
to my friends to view
Just a Few?

I do my best
the rest is up to you
Window opens
this is not right
seems an Error
“no not, Hera

Well it might as well be
It leaves me in the dark
I tick little boxes
My arrow to send
See it go blue
I’m going red

I’m standing waiting
the buffering never ending
So in the end
My little X friend
Comes in Handy.

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

I just got finished writing a limerick with a friend of mine on here about the freezing of WC.. it is frustrating I tell you what.. I love the friends I have made here and the atmosphere, the level of talent, but the errors, the freezing it really is ridiculous.. love this little rant.. very cute.. made me giggle.

[John Preston]

The errors well I make quite a lot. I've only been writing , well not writing as such less than a year.
Wow if I could write like you. I started a story but I don't know how to set it out or were to put the Dot's and I's. . I'll read more of your story's when I get this one out og my head. I'm going for a shower...LOL

[AprilRN1210]

lol... enjoy... and I am learning too.. I have only been writing a little over three months.. :)
read morelol... enjoy... and I am learning too.. I have only been writing a little over three months.. :)

and thank you... you do pretty well yourself...

[Ashira Macy]

Haha, I love your humorous poems. This site is awesome, but it does have its little glitches more often than I would like. It drives me crazy. Doesn't even work on my mom's computer.

[Edward Lancheister]

interesting poem, good expression John. i like it