Beautiful Woman

This is about the person you love in your life. Who you share your whole life with. Is this how you feel or do you see them even more so ?

Sun’s rays awakening beauty

See how flower heads unfold

Showing all their glory colourful

Corolla unfold giving energy

Calling insects bee’s nector

Come take feed my seed

Cooler climates’ young too

Showing so beautiful form

You, yes you who read

What of you each morn

Showing your beautiful form

Eyes see wondrous sights

Reflecting thy image all

Why call to me this night

Rays of light so you so cool

Reading mind thought pleases

Enjoyment smile delights right

Seeing you their touch, smile

Colorful to me you be, no need

Artificial color, paste, Kohl

Arms, legs, thy petals be

Eyes sparkle, shine and glitter

Galaxy of luminous light, untouched

Thy garment beauty visible see

Could you be my fleece my sun

So inviting calling silently

Aroma over whelming senses

Release sweet flower unfolds

Ye take ones breath unseen

Give such pleasure enjoyment love

Eyes talk no sound no need

We read so much our minds eye

Blind

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You are a amazing writer.
"Artificial color, paste, Kohl
Arms, legs, thy petals be
Eyes sparkle, shine and glitter
Galaxy of luminous light, untouched "
The above lines stood out for me. I like the complete poem. Create good thoughts and vision. Some people make us yearn to know them. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[John Preston]

Thank you. For saying I could not read or write very well when I left school, well I'm pleased. Yes I make a lot of mistakes. Not knowing where to put the dot's and I's - you know.

[Coyote Poetry]

We learn with time and practice. I have been writing for over 40 years and I'm still learning. I try to edit better now. I still mess up on the verb tenses. Good to meet you.

[kassystiletto-mermalien]

Woah..beauty is described in many manners, but this way is completely intriguing and mind blowing.

[John Preston]

Thank you very mush kassI'll, sure read some of yours

[Ian Gilmour]

The emphasis on light contrasting with the concluding word "blind" is a nice touch. We look at light too long, it damages us, sometimes even blinds us, but maybe we were just blind the whole time and in darkness we see for the first time. Great imagery.

[Susan Beth Horvath]

Smooth as silk, full of excellent phrasing and vibrant imagery

[John Preston]

Thank you.

[John Preston]

Thank you all. I have submitted this as a song on another site. I'll have to look up stanza. Yes the apostrophe should not be their.

[Parimal Pratyush]

This can be a great song. Please think about it. :)

[Wandering Minstrel]

this poem goes down as smooth as a cup of tea!

[Lyn Anderson]

There is so much emotion and love in this piece, well done. As to minor edits. Not sure what the apostrophe is for after the You -- perhaps you meant a comma, or a dash, and since you have apostrophes in the preceding stanzas, you may want to include them where needed in the last stanza.

[Matching Socks]

This is beautiful John. :)

[John Preston]

Ance. It's all about you a woman. being next to the one who loves them. I think you understand this.