Under the sky,In the grey night!

This poem is about how one feels after a heartbreak!

Under the dark sky, in the dull gray night

Looking at those dots which twinkle bright

I'm reminded of the light that once prevailed

When the ship of my life beautifully sailed

Cheers around and each face was known

Each morning the smiling sun beautifully shone

Not dim,nor red but of the perfect hue

When life was about us-me and you.

Happy together and perfect to the 'T'

We knew we met coz we were meant to be

It was a bond so strong, a hold so tight

I knew you were the one- my 'Mr. Right'

Our lives entwined to be as one

Upon the journey that we had just begun

And then one day fate played a dirty game

The love was dead and nothing just the same

With you all my dreams looked like coming true

But you robbed me of those,what can i now do?

You brought everything to an end and said

You want me no more

Swept out of your life like the dust on the floor

Now,I sit here heart broken with nobody to blame

Coz the reason why it happened doesn't have a name

I acted as if i hated you and was as rude as could be

I told you i wont forgive you ever for what you did to me

But, I'm tired of trying to hate you, Tired of acting strong

Tired of crying myself to sleep and tired of calling you wrong!

You stole my heart,took it away and broke it into two

What surprises me is that u always felt U loved me more than I do!

But Today, In this grey night, while you conveniently sleep,

Here i am, remembering you and consoling my heart that weeps.

Author's Note

Please drop in your reviews and criticism is also invited :)

Reviews

[Kelsey]

I surely didn't expect the twist that this poem took, and I really like that about it. So full of emotion and beautifully written. I really liked the flow of the piece, and I feel you did a great job with it. Nicely done, and welcome to the site. :)

[Prerna Gaur]

Thank you so much Kelsey :). Means a lot :)

[Kelsey]

No problem at all, lovely. I look forward to reading more of your work. :)