Honourable man

                               Honorable Man

Let us honor if we can

The man who withstood the tremor

Though we value none

But those who buried under the EARTH.

Let us honor if we can

The man who braved the storm

Though we value none

But those swept away by the   WATER.

Let us honor if we can

The man who endured the heat

Though we value none

But those perished in the FIRE.

Let us honor if we can

The man who faced the wind

Though we value none

But those swayed by the AIR.

Let us honor if we can

The man who reached heights

Though we value none

But those who are limited by the SKY.

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

never heard anything so-called "Good" 'bout us men esp. from ladies since long, perhaps.. now as i'm reading, feel... quite bewildering. every stanza of yours speaking an every 'nutter course of reality. these might've been those men who reached beyond horizons, & of course, ain't negotiated treating women right. kinda very deep and intriguing poetry it is.

looking forward to reading your work!

[prema]

thanks for reading and commenting

[Adam Adams]

anytime, prema.

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I enjoyed your elemental approach to this piece. Thanks for sharing!

[prema]

Thanks a lot for the comment