Banjar Baag

the harsh life

is berukh zindagi to asi gye ha akk,

jeonde jee hi mott nu leya hai takk.

adhkhadh jehi zindagi sadi bejaan jehi ho gyi,

sadi eh deh shamshaan jehi ho gyi.

kde haaseyan de c phul khilde,

hun haase hoye mahenge bazaron mull milde.

sade sukhan di c sanghani chha sir te,

dhakka mareya apneya ne asi ta gir gye.

Author's Note

i may have done many mistakes . punjabi language is my strength

Reviews

[Abilash Uttama]

bahut badiya kavita likhi ae preet, dukh sukh tan aande rendhe ne zindagi vich par appan nu kadhi himmat ni haarni chaiyde :)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

thnkuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu very much g

[Abilash Uttama]

welcome g :)

[Gurleen Saluja]

Mistakes tan life'ch hondiya rehndiya.. Apni tarfo changi koshish kitti tussan. Thanks for sharing :)
Ignore my mistakes also please :p

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

thank u mam. mam mnu mistakes kadaniya ni aundiya

[Gurleen Saluja]

Ma'am bolan Di koi lod nai.. Hopefully main twade ton chhoti han.

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

no tuc mere to vadde ho mam

[Gurleen Saluja]

I'd be pleased if you call me by my name please.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

life could be cruel.............but it also is beautiful.......which makes it worth living.....so stand up after each fall......
bahot sunder kavita.....
:)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

u r absolutely ryt sir. thank you sir

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome............!!! :) :)

[prajakta]

Nice write preet...keep writing!

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

thank you very much di

[Prashant Pandey]

wow. interesting to read. thnx for sharing :-)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

thank you sir

[Saddam]

Very good g.
No problem, strength is sweet and language is also great.

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

thank you very much g

[Saddam]

Welcome g welcome.....