still we are STRANGER'S

a deep reality

we laughed together,

made a pleasant weather,

promised for the next gather,

but still we are stranger's.

guided each other like a ranger,

saved each other from the danger,

we were sad mood changers,

but still we are stanger's

you cared for me i cared for you,

i missed you , you missed me too,

ready for everything to do,

but still we are stranger's

 

listened each other,

no need to say further,

but still we are stranger's.

Author's Note

pls give ur reviews

Reviews

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I really appreciate your views for strangers. Sometimes we really get involved too must which with the strangers but at last we are strangers all!

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

yeah thanx for stopping by

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome Always!

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

:):):):):)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

it is indeed sad.......how in a moment......people become strangers...........
innocent and heartfelt poem......
i liked it!!!
:)
p.s. some spelling mistakes like 'too' and 'to'

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

thank u sir . i corrected it sir .

[Pushkar Prabhat]

okay Mam.......you are welcome Mam!!! :) :)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

u r teasing me ? pls dont call me mam . m too small

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are not small......you are young.......i am too.......
not teasing just harmless fun......Sir is big for me too....

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

u desrve sir,sir

[Pushkar Prabhat]

i don't..........but i really appreciate it.....such honor......thank you......you are sweet!!! take care :) :)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

sweet !! yes i m

[Pushkar Prabhat]

yup!!! :) :) :) :)

[Elisa]

Such a tragic, yet all-to-familiar subject for many people, myself included. It's really sad when someone you've known so well for so long soon becomes a stranger, and your relationship with them begins to fade, because you realize that you both have changed. Or, when you meet someone new, and you love spending time with them, and you end up never seeing them again for one reason or another. You feel the loss of the missed opportunity. Lovely job with this poem.

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

thank you very very much

[prajakta]

nice write preet.keep writing,..

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

thank u mam

[BlueDreams]

An awesome write it is :) Beautiful poem yet sad phase in everybody's life :(
100/100

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

thank u very much g

[Abilash Uttama]

Wonderful poem Preet, though there are some errors but they are inevitable and will keep on diminishing as you write further, overall an enjoyable read and terrific work for someone of your age. Keep writing :)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

thank u g .

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

I would like to knw my mistakes so tht I can improve

[Abilash Uttama]

strangers me apostrophe hata de
aur listen ke sath to aata hai to listened to
keep writing :)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

ohh! thnku actualy on my book i hav not done these mistakes here i forgot

[Abilash Uttama]

koi naa :)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

punjabi realy suits u

[Abilash Uttama]

thanks g :)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

most welcome