open book

about me

i guess my life a open book,

anybody can take a look.

no secrets here to hide,

always flowing like a tide.

my life is without a secret,

a live show without the ticket.

like a bat not a wicket,

but not fixed like a cricket.

problems are mine friend,

coming turn wise like a trend.

smiling and laughing are my hobby,

always welcomed in mine heart lobby.

i guess my life a open book,

anybody can take a look ....

Author's Note

my first poetry on writerscafe . hope u like it

Reviews

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

i guess my life a open book,
anybody can take a look ....

Very nice and wonderful to read. Like 👍

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

thanks fo ur kind words

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome always!

[Saddam]

smiling and laughing are my hobby,
always welcomed in mine heart lobby.

The best therapy of life is smiling and laughing, and you have both.
Great poem...

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

thank you . if u know punjabi thn pls read paath (new poem by me ) nd even if u dont know punjabi thn also try once

[Deepika]

A cute work Harpreet :) It's always good to keep our minds composed and open to new ideas and thoughts and not chain it with secrets that might burn us from within someday.

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

thank you sooooooo much

[stansg]

Nice work, simple, innocent, and really effective.

like a bat not a wicket,
but not fixed like a cricket.

I really liked this part, couldn't stop smiling. Lovely work.

[Shubham Joshi]

It's a nice poem, simple, full of emotions and innocence and I really loved it.

[Death's Poet]

Wow I really like this. You are quite good at writing :)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

thank u so much g

[Pushkar Prabhat]

great attempt........
honest sweet and very innocent!!!
i really liked it......
:)
p.s. some errors are there but i will leave them for other able writers to point out!!!
thank you for sharing.....

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

thank you sir . I will try my best for the nxt time. thank you once again

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome!!!! :) :)

[Abilash Uttama]

nice flow and rhyme, beautiful poem. liked it :)

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

thank you g

[Prashant Pandey]

nice words. Specially I liked 4 lines. my life is without a secret,
a live show without the ticket.
like a bat not a wicket,
but not fixed like a cricket.

gr8. keep it up.

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

thank you prashant thank you very much . you gave me new will to write more

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

i love my papa nd do everything for him