^I´m sorry..

^I´m sorry..

A Poem by aviiar:))

^I´m sorry..

 

To me, you´re the one who really inspire,

Because of you, I´m not afraid to try,

I can´t help it, but I’ll smile,

That thing I won’t deny.

 

I miss the way you talk,

And that fancy little look,

I know now that it´s hard,

And it really makes me sad.

 

I already miss everything about you,

I hope you miss me too..

Please do come back,

Cause I felt that there´s a lack.

 

I just won´t let you know,

that it´s really boring though,

and I realized that it´s hard when you´re away,

and it´s time for me to make a way..

 

I can´t be the person you want me to be,

Cause I just want to be me..

Me, whose name is just a simple ABBY,

And for everything I´ve done, I´M SORRY… :((

 

© 2011 aviiar:))


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Well done. Keep on penning.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was really beautiful. I likes the flow of the words and the way you ended it was great. Do your best! =)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Once again my words are same for you my friend beautifull poem

Very well written.

Regards
PRODICAL

Posted 13 Years Ago


The late Karen Carpenter sung a song called Love Me The Way I am. You should listen to it. She had a problem with her widower before she died in 1983 because she felt no matter how hard she tried he couldnot love her the way she was and she asked to be let free to be herself. Lucie

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sometimes the "I'm sorry" is not meant for another person - its meant for ourselves. You gave a good effort with this one.

Chris

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow this is a really good poem! It really makes *the reader* feel sorry for you. Brilliant!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like the honest words and emotion in this poem. Sometime all we have is to ask for forgiveness and hope for a good ending.
"Me, whose name is just a simple ABBY,
And for everything I´ve done, I´M SORRY… "
A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


good

Posted 13 Years Ago


are you talking about :((?
well, i just remember how it feels when
i´m missing that person i´m apologizing for..

Posted 13 Years Ago


"I can´t be the person you want me to be,
Cause I just want to be me.."

Wow! Great poem...Very well structured! Just wondering what was the last 3 figures all about? Haha! :)))

Posted 13 Years Ago



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aviiar:))
aviiar:))

bicol, Philippines



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i just want to write..but not all the time..i have a special mood that is not in me always that whenever it strike me, i start to get some papers and pen and write it down.i love writing poems,specia.. more..

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