THE WINDOW

This is a Senryu. This Japanese form of poem has 5-7-5 syllables format but it is different from a Haiku in the sense that it is related to Human nature

Windows of your heart,
Keep open, let in Love; there's
enough room for him.

Windows of your mind,
Don't close, Mr. Knowledge's to come-
Shouldn't you greet him?

Windows of conscience,
Welcome Truth,Justice; mentors
to you when in doubt.

Windows of senses,
Open wide to Famous Five :
Sight, Touch, Sound, Taste, Smell.

Windows of your soul,
Open to Enlightenment;
Your guide let him be.

Author's Note

This is collection of Senryu for THE WINDOW (POETRY WRITING CONTEST). I think I am not wrong in saying these are Senryu as they basically deal with human nature and human emotion.

Reviews

[Susan]

This is a beautiful piece! I really like the word choice and the structure. This poem is simple yet powerful, which means the message goes a long way!
I love the message too. Nice work! Really nice work...

~Happy Writing!~
-Susan

[T.K.F]

I love this poem and your choice of Words is awesome :)

[Prashil]

I read the poem because of a reason. And I found it to be pro. I know it is not easy to write poems. But your word choice, rhythm, flow, the essence of a poem- all is top class. The message is serene and deep and very calmly put. A very nice piece of literature. Cheers

[Decidious wind]

A wonderful and moving poem

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Great! If I had to quote my favourite line, I have to quote the entire poem! Awesome job... Nice imagination... and... excellent expression! Kudoz to you, Prateeksha Khot!☺

[anant mody]

small n sweet

keep up good work madam:-)

[abluehorseandflowers]

Oh yipee, I adore learning new poetic forms. And your progression the the elements of the psyche is a delight. Thanks.

[Praveeta]

Quite enriching poem. Thanks for sharing.

[ADITYA (Deep)]

A nice portray of Human nature........beautifully crafted piece !

[Amy Azra Dean]

A beautiful piece!! :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

they are senyru...a nice series of them...they go together as one and can be read separately...

nice philosophy contained within.

nicely written

jacob