BETRAYAL

A Story by Prateeksha Khot

Betrayal hurts most when it is from someone you trusted the most

The slowly inching knife
finally made her realize
what Betrayal was .......

© 2010 Prateeksha Khot

Author's Note

My last for the A 10 Word Story. Please note : When you count words, you are not supposed to include articles. Or atleast that is what our English Professor told us.

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Mike Espinosa

I enjoyed your concise language, it captured the demented beauty of the scene. I love the capitalization of Betrayal, it gives the ending more oomph. Very well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vincent Esprit FMI

You have captured it all. Well written

Vincent

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nancy Lee Shrader

Good ten word story. So well said.

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

K@lp@n@

beautiful. and dark.........

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hello1

you have conyed pretty much in those 10 words.

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rochser

that was great. 10 words and so much told in them. Best of luck for the contest.

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

chaffy

... i cant count, but i think there are 11 words.. or is just a 10 word story symbolic? anyways, i get it.. sad...

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on April 12, 2010
Last Updated on April 14, 2010
Tags: Betrayal, hurt, kill, knife, trust, someone, love, hate

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Prateeksha Khot

Mumbai, Maharashtra, India

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A happy-go-lucky rebel, i like doing things my way : that is the different way. I am creative and like trying out new stuff : There's hardly anything in which I am not interested. Plus point ? : I HAV.. more..