IF ONLY ........

IF ONLY ........

A Story by Prateeksha Khot
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Sometimes you are just not able to tell what is in your heart and when you do it might be too late........

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" WHY ? WHY ? "  
" Because " , she whispered her last, " I Love You "

© 2010 Prateeksha Khot


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Prateeksha Khot
This is for the 10 word story contest.

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Haunting, particularly when combined with the picture.

Posted 4 Years Ago
i have a poem by the same title .. go through it when you find time ..

nice story .. but these days people mostly go ahead nd say what they feel .. sadly this has given risen to a common notion that "i love you" is just an excuse to flirt !

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

so sad. I liked the pic though. It itself says so much

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that was great. sad and touching

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that was so sad. really sad. really, you have created the perfect story in a mere 10 words

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is stupendous! Pure WOW! It gave a shiver down my spine.. Brutally sad. And beautifully penned. Wow!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 12, 2010
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Prateeksha Khot
Prateeksha Khot

Mumbai, Maharashtra, India



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